Improvement of DPS

This is my Improved DPS. 

I really like how it has turned out and how it also continues the colour tone of my magazine. 

I also believe it looks a lot more profesianal and adds to the gig review more so.

What needs to be done... (time management)

I now need to take the feed back i gained from my audience and use it to help me make my pages better and gain the best grade possible. My first step is to work on the double page spread. The things I need to add here are quite minor but will make a lot of change to my magazine and make it look more like one I would see in a store. As well as this I feel i need to add some page continuity to both the dps and the contents page inform of my masthead. I then need to go on and talk some more photos for my contents page as its not varied enough.

Response to my magazine pages

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dps idea

Contence Page Idea

Front Cover Idea

feed back summary and changes to be made

From the feed back on my magazine pages I found out that the head line images on my Contence page could be positioned better as there kinda all over the place. But my contence page is ok. However they would add a head cap to start the article and precent it better.